webnovel
Nightflames
NightflamesLv41yr
2023-04-10 00:32

Here's my review 😁 Firstly, your book is in a drama sequence that's ok but I'll say prose is better for more reads. Secondly you kept changing from first to third POV and sincerely speaking, it became confusing at some point. Thirdly, I really had a good laugh while reading it 😂😂 some scenes were Soo funny. Also, the names aren't intriguing to be frank and they're quite a few grammatical errors but that's fine... Everybody makes mistakes. I really enjoyed the book While it lasted but unfortunately couldn't move past chapter 14 as it wasn't for me, the plot definitely wasn't for me. However, keep up the good work author! Writing a story isn't an easy feat. I'll commend that I'm really really impressed with your updates... Very! So don't stop writing and updating more chapters. So overall, I'll rate it 3 over 5... Well done author and don't stop writing, you'll definitely find the reader that'll appreciate this lovely story of yours... From night flames #Author Mike.

Liked by 2 people

LIKE
Replies3
Ink_Quanta
Ink_QuantaLv12

Well, thanks a lot but just saying if you think the plot is not for you and you don't have any problem going through the locked chapters I mean maybe you can start from Ch : 41, I mean it's an ongoing Novel I really want someone to catch on with the upcoming chapters so you should at least give it an other try, if you like, but thanks! Anyways...

Nightflames
NightflamesLv4

umm are you the author of the book? oh well I'll see about that.

Ink_Quanta:Well, thanks a lot but just saying if you think the plot is not for you and you don't have any problem going through the locked chapters I mean maybe you can start from Ch : 41, I mean it's an ongoing Novel I really want someone to catch on with the upcoming chapters so you should at least give it an other try, if you like, but thanks! Anyways...
Ink_Quanta
Ink_QuantaLv12

Yep! Thanks!

Other Reviews
King_Undead
King_UndeadLv3
Related Stories

Grinding Cultivation Toward Martial Saint

This is a fresh release from the pen of the creator behind "Longevity: Starting from the Qi Tags". Dive in and enjoy the read! --------------------- Jiang Ning transmigrates to a world on the brink of chaos. To preserve himself, he starts training in martial arts with the help of his prior experience, quietly growing stronger. As his martial techniques reach beyond their limits and he gains various abilities, some of which include divine authority. Starting with martial arts, he begins to master divine powers and control innate divine abilities. The Five Animals Fist allows him to cultivate from a beginner to perfection, continuously breaking limits, with each organ storing essence and housing divine spirits. The Vajra Immortal Body gives him an unbreakable body and eternal bones. The Inner Elixir Cultivation Skill promises eternal youth and never-ending vitality. On the day the Martial Saint, who has dominated the world for eight hundred years, strikes at him, Jiang Ning simply smiles. Are you really trying to attack a divine being? When the weapon that once killed gods and immortals falls upon him, he tilts his head slightly, his hair remaining unbroken. His foundation has long since forged an indestructible golden body! The other names of this book are 'While Others Cultivate Martial Arts, I Cultivate Divine Powers!', 'Beginning with Hepatic Experience to Fleshly Sanctification', 'Starting with Martial Arts to Become a God'

Scenery on the river · Eastern
Not enough ratings
222 Chs

Concubines Lead to Strength: The Path to Immortality Begins with Taking a Spouse

“What! The young master has married another concubine?” After Gu Changge is bound to the system, sharing innate talent and even cultivation results with a Daoist Couple (wife) is possible. Whether it's consuming elixirs or treasures from heaven and earth, or from daily cultivation, everything can be shared! “Just by binding with one partner, I went from a waste to a spiritual body. What if I had multiple partners?” Since that day, he realized that working hard in cultivation was not as effective as taking in more spouses, and that taking elixirs himself was not as good as feeding his wives! The aloof and warm-hearted sect's holy maiden, the playful imperial princess, the dragon race's transformed girl with white hair... 【Your Daoist Couple has cultivated through the night, shared cultivation progress!】 【Your Daoist Couple has grasped the essence of swordsmanship, shared insights!】 【Your Daoist Couple has consumed a supreme snow lotus, comprehended a law, shared!】 【Dual Cultivating with your Daoist Couple, rewards...】 (Disclaimer: Dual Cultivation is a unique method of cultivation where a man and a woman cultivate together by having sex) As he feeds his wives every day with ease and pleasure, he unknowingly becomes a celestial being, perfects the holy body, and stands above all living beings! (The story is focused on daily life, is lighthearted with a touch of humor, and does not stress the protagonist)

Ancient Keyboard Immortal · Eastern
Not enough ratings
171 Chs

Complete Martial Arts Attributes

The dimensional rifts link the earth to the Xingwu continent. This is the dawn of the martial arts era! I will be useless if I don't practice martial arts? Don't worry, I have a system that allows me to pick up attributes. When other people drop attributes during their training, I can pick them up secretly. Huh? Did you just say that beating up people will make them drop attributes too? In that case... You defeated a sword skill genius. He dropped Enlightenment×2, Sword Talent×1... You've picked them up. Your insights have improved and you've gained a beginner stage sword talent! You defeated a blade skill talent. He dropped Blade Battle Technique×1, Malicious Blade Intent×1... You picked them up and learned a rare blade battle technique! You've also figured out Malicious Blade Intent and have become extremely fierce! You defeated a physique talent. He dropped Physique Scripture×1, Holy-Blood Dominant Physique×1... You picked them up and learned a new top-grade scripture! You are exceptionally lucky to have received the Holy-Blood Dominant Physique. It can change your physique completely and you earned a god-level title 'Endless Health'. Someone killed a powerful star beast and dropped Spiritual Sight×1 and Blank Attribute×60... You picked them up secretly and receive a spiritual eye talent as well as 60 points to add to any of your current attributes! You defeat many opponents in your life. You accidentally kill an innocent devil and split the universe into two when you're practicing your blade at home. You burst the sun with your fist and the world is engulfed in darkness... That's when you realize... You're invincible!

Don't Enter The Jianghu · Eastern
4.3
3101 Chs