Here's my review 😁 Firstly, your book is in a drama sequence that's ok but I'll say prose is better for more reads. Secondly you kept changing from first to third POV and sincerely speaking, it became confusing at some point. Thirdly, I really had a good laugh while reading it 😂😂 some scenes were Soo funny. Also, the names aren't intriguing to be frank and they're quite a few grammatical errors but that's fine... Everybody makes mistakes. I really enjoyed the book While it lasted but unfortunately couldn't move past chapter 14 as it wasn't for me, the plot definitely wasn't for me. However, keep up the good work author! Writing a story isn't an easy feat. I'll commend that I'm really really impressed with your updates... Very! So don't stop writing and updating more chapters. So overall, I'll rate it 3 over 5... Well done author and don't stop writing, you'll definitely find the reader that'll appreciate this lovely story of yours... From night flames #Author Mike.
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LIKEWell, thanks a lot but just saying if you think the plot is not for you and you don't have any problem going through the locked chapters I mean maybe you can start from Ch : 41, I mean it's an ongoing Novel I really want someone to catch on with the upcoming chapters so you should at least give it an other try, if you like, but thanks! Anyways...
umm are you the author of the book? oh well I'll see about that.