Actually, I'm poor at understanding this kind of story. Wow! But this one is easy to read and imagine the scene. Try it! You won't regrer

you just know a book is going to be good when it has such a name. I was immediately drawn by the unique style of writing and the way you explored human psychology. it was quite awesome.

I have long been looking for a book that would go in this direction, so I excited to continue reading it, as the first few chapters so far have trapped me in them, making me want to continue reading. Good job author!

This is my honest thoughts, I think your writing is superb but it needs to be proofread for grammar mistakes. Your storyline is engaging and full of action which keeps the reader glued to their seat. The descriptions are amazing!

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I really like the humor aspect of the story and admire the concept of human psychology that you put through in the story. There are some grammar problems in the early chapters but it doesn't hinder in understanding the flow of the story. Some paragraphs are way too long which are kinda hard to read using mobile phones. Also, there are some cuts or spaces in the first chapter that you forgot to fix. Overall, your story really shows how high standard your skill in writing is. I hope you keep writing more stories since this one is already completed.

The first thing to say would be the unique way of author's writing as this is the first time I read a story written in such a way. And honestly, it is good. Just POV and the third-person perspective confused me at first but then it became clear. Keep it up.

Just starting out but the writing style is unique. Want to see how this story develops.

The storyline is intriguing, and the characters are perfect. The author controlled the pace of the story so well that it enabled readers to have a great read.