It was good for a while. It was interesting, but it read like Chinese Cultivation novle. he keeps getting stronger and stronger, which is cool. But he doesn't do anything even after he finishes his evolution. He doesn't really do anything, just more lists of things he's doing and going to do. And, the whole dimension thing messed me up. He was supposed to be opening the underworld to a dimension that was gonna house his faction. He had a base in the Underworld. And then he had a pocket dimension. and dimension he was gonna go into for his faction from the Underworld. In the pocket dimension he was creating had a world all in itself filled with origin seed energy. Then he was gonna use a gate to the Earth from the dimension He created for his faction. It just sounds all f****** convoluted. It's too much. Basically, the cool factor wore off of him getting stronger. He didn't do anything with hid strength. So while it was cool, there was nothing other than a cool factor once the cool factor wore off it was boring. The novel became boring.
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