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Wise_Mystical_Tree
Wise_Mystical_TreeLv41yr
2023-01-27 23:27

It's good so far and has potential. Keep up the good work

As The GOW Thor

Evil_Grews
4.5
13 Chs

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RuffyRaph
RuffyRaphLv4

He won't

1yr
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OuterGodACSqts
OuterGodACSqtsLv13

BEYOND disappointing. 1. Has the power of Dr Manhattan yet, still gets bicthed out by Odin. 2. fights that can be ended in seconds get drawn out for no reason and the fight draws out for three chapters, THREE CHAPTERS OF USELESSNESS.

1yr

Venomous_X
Venomous_XLv14

I like it dude really great and we all can’t wait for SIF IF U KNOW WHAT I MEAN 😏🤣

1yr
Sorcein
SorceinLv3

Man I'm really enjoying this story and I think it has a lot of potential. But if you want to give it a little seriousness, I would recommend rewriting it, only without Dr. Manhattan, in my opinion, would be very interesting. It's not a criticism.

1yr
Garland
GarlandLv4

Really? You could have just had him be in the body of Thor which would have been alright as it would be a story of him changing and being different to the the original thor but here events are just following what happened in canon with just minor differences. What matteres when he defeated Kratos when he is still alive. He is already strong enough but then you still had to give him Dr. Manhatten's powers. If that's the case then what reason did he have to be thor in the first place. This is just op for the sake of op. What did i expect from the summary alone. This could have been good with him trying to be a better father and person and trully changing the events of ragnarok in a meaningful way. Here he is just op and solves problems.

1yr
THOTSLAYER
THOTSLAYERLv4

Please do continue mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

1yr
Gulf_Alpha_Yankee
Gulf_Alpha_YankeeLv13

I really like it so far. please continue to write this book.

1yr
M2skMan
M2skManLv4

Like Wise_Mystic said, good so far and has a lot of potentials to be great. Want more chapters thu.

1yr
ThatDudeGoku
ThatDudeGokuLv13

This was such an awesome concept, wish there was more 😔

1yr
Kaito_Uzumaki
Kaito_UzumakiLv4

Update this beahtiful piece of art Please

1yr
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