I stopped at chapter 34, The story is good, it has an interesting development but throws everything into the air whenever Ned Stark is involved the author seems to be a fan of the Starks which ends up getting in the way and throwing all of Jon's development in the trash, there seems to be no consequences for Ned's actions on Jon's part and no resentment on his part, and being the father of the brothers/cousins he can get away with it all, the only difference is that Jon curses Caitlin a little the path chosen by the author is not mine I like it but as I said it is not a bad story despite the ridiculous development in the last chapter by Ashara and her daughter, anyway if you like the Starks a lot I think you will have no problem reading this fanfic but if you are someone who likes something more balanced or if you are a targaryen fan I do not recommend reading.
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