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_justumeh_
_justumeh_Lv28mth_justumeh_

I have not read this yet but I don't like it already. I understand you might be a new writer. Your chapter one was welcome to create on web novel. You should probably delete that And in the next chapter, your intro about how people should support your book shouldn't be there You should've put that in the review or author's thought if you wanted that. It's not supposed to be there. TBH... I actually read the first 3 chapters and I love your story line. But once you have edited these mistakes I will be sure to read and comment on each chapter😊👍

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Iscream2
Iscream2AuthorIscream2

Sure I will.

_justumeh_:OK. Please check out my book too.Enchanted bonds. It's really interesting and you can comment and review too .I would really appreciate that
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Iscream2AuthorIscream2

Thank you soo much for your review, the chapter 1 wasn't intentional, I tried deleting it but i am unable to, I don't know why. I will take your advice, thank you soo much. 💜

_justumeh_
_justumeh_Lv2_justumeh_

You're welcome. I also had that problem when writing mine. But what I did was to go back to the chapter and clean everything there and clicked update. I don't really remember but I solved the problem.I enjoy your book a lot and please be sure to update regularly ☺️

Iscream2:Thank you soo much for your review, the chapter 1 wasn't intentional, I tried deleting it but i am unable to, I don't know why. I will take your advice, thank you soo much. 💜
Iscream2
Iscream2AuthorIscream2

I will do my best, thank you. 😊

_justumeh_
_justumeh_Lv2_justumeh_

OK. Please check out my book too.Enchanted bonds. It's really interesting and you can comment and review too .I would really appreciate that

Iscream2:I will do my best, thank you. 😊