Review Detail of mellowdusk in The Rooh of Greed
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I had read upto episode 17 (As of writing this, it is the latest chapter).The story so far seems great, but my only complaint is the first chapter.The first chapter could have been more better.
The Rooh of Greed
EvilGrandpa
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EvilGrandpa:Yeah, I do understand your point. But the thing is that massacre was a turning point for Wei Wushang, that incident is what truly broke the chains binding him. Also, the backstory I have planned for Wei Wushang will immediately make you understand why he did what he did. But I do agree, the way he is now vastly different from the way he was during the massacre, but I don't want to change it, as it will ruin the backstory I have crafted for him. Also, my apologies for the late reply, got caught up in the storm of life.
I am referring to the back story of the protagonist, in the first half of the first chapter. 1) The protagonist, who calculates pros and cons, would not choose to massacre his clan, which is a Rank-5 clan, for a brief moment of feeling 'freedom'. Even more so, when that said person knew that he would die. The risk was just not worth it. 2) The protagonist had numerous choices with his Rank-5 cultivation base. But in the first half of the chapter, the protagonist acted like a bratty middle-aged person who would let the adrenaline get to their head. The protagonist you have portrayed from the latter half of the first chapter would have never done this.
EvilGrandpa:Oh, could go into a little detail?Also, thanks for the stars🔥
Yeah, I do understand your point. But the thing is that massacre was a turning point for Wei Wushang, that incident is what truly broke the chains binding him. Also, the backstory I have planned for Wei Wushang will immediately make you understand why he did what he did. But I do agree, the way he is now vastly different from the way he was during the massacre, but I don't want to change it, as it will ruin the backstory I have crafted for him. Also, my apologies for the late reply, got caught up in the storm of life.
mellowdusk:I am referring to the back story of the protagonist, in the first half of the first chapter. 1) The protagonist, who calculates pros and cons, would not choose to massacre his clan, which is a Rank-5 clan, for a brief moment of feeling 'freedom'. Even more so, when that said person knew that he would die. The risk was just not worth it. 2) The protagonist had numerous choices with his Rank-5 cultivation base. But in the first half of the chapter, the protagonist acted like a bratty middle-aged person who would let the adrenaline get to their head. The protagonist you have portrayed from the latter half of the first chapter would have never done this.