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Uh_YEAH
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Suggestion: this novel has an interesting story. a nerd who is selfish and experienced in thinking. in an urgent situation he can see the advantages and disadvantages. example in the outer disciple competition (In other novels maybe the protagonist would hide everything and pretend to be smart because of tricking the cultivation level with the reason of ALMIGHTY SYSTEM And Ada would seek thrill by slapping the opponent's butt.) But the novel had a flaw in terms of background. example (if han cai is relaxed why not make pills or formations, don't rely too much on the system. if you have free time add more experience with pills, formations or talismans.) And what I like is the time skip, if the time skip would you please explain in more detail about the things that went through for example refining the longevity pill for his father or his mortal family? it's much nicer to look at than to look at the sights all the time or at least once make another hobby (silver flute) calms down in terms of cultivation. and heavy on his explorations (spirit mine) and occasional comedic themes to keep things less tense. DON'T LISTEN TO THE RATS STILL ON YOUR OWN HEART. IF THERE ARE ANY INTERESTING SUGGESTIONS THEN THINK ABOUT IT.

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