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bstasicLv52yr
2023-04-04 03:23

This novel is just ok, average Intellect is quite low not as horrible as Complete Martial Arts Attributes, but still annoying at times. Biggest problem is release rate, in march 2023 author released only 8 chapters, so chinese readers will not support the novel, meaning this novel can be abandoned at any point

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KumoLoversClub
KumoLoversClubLv14

wdym? at least complete martial arts attribute is consistent and decently translated

bstasic
bstasicLv5

My take on Complete Martial Arts Attributes, Top 5 most irritating novels, author does not hesistate to make every interation between MC and other characters infuriting, starting from trying to be funny in a forceful way again and again, one or twice it will make me chuckle, but same cliche becomes unbearable, for example everytime MC does something amazing and characters are looking with amazement he thinks/says "I am not gay", and then usual routine of reacting to this for a few paragraphs. Using a brick as weapon is so out of place that everyone is weirded out and a few paragraphs on how "we should not offend him...", even weird enough to stop an all out war on the battlefield and for characters to make paragraphs of comments on this brick, probably only once it was trully funny in his academy after a fight when MC said "I give my every oponent two horns as a sign of respect" All males are simps when females give them that look they cower in fear... A lot of cringe all other the place The system itself is far from perfect, but if the author would focus only on fast progression most foreign readers will enjoy, but he also has to please his overlords with some racism and Praise the China... Hope someone will leave a few comments about how novel feels at 1000+ On the other hand, this novel gave me appreciation for other authors and how hard it is to make a readable novel. Thanks

KumoLoversClub:wdym? at least complete martial arts attribute is consistent and decently translated
Battleform
BattleformLv5

yeah, there's too many forced jokes that breaks reader's immersion in CMA, and this jokes are all the same

bstasic:My take on Complete Martial Arts Attributes, Top 5 most irritating novels, author does not hesistate to make every interation between MC and other characters infuriting, starting from trying to be funny in a forceful way again and again, one or twice it will make me chuckle, but same cliche becomes unbearable, for example everytime MC does something amazing and characters are looking with amazement he thinks/says "I am not gay", and then usual routine of reacting to this for a few paragraphs. Using a brick as weapon is so out of place that everyone is weirded out and a few paragraphs on how "we should not offend him...", even weird enough to stop an all out war on the battlefield and for characters to make paragraphs of comments on this brick, probably only once it was trully funny in his academy after a fight when MC said "I give my every oponent two horns as a sign of respect" All males are simps when females give them that look they cower in fear... A lot of cringe all other the place The system itself is far from perfect, but if the author would focus only on fast progression most foreign readers will enjoy, but he also has to please his overlords with some racism and Praise the China... Hope someone will leave a few comments about how novel feels at 1000+ On the other hand, this novel gave me appreciation for other authors and how hard it is to make a readable novel. Thanks
KumoLoversClub
KumoLoversClubLv14

our brain waves might be different. the flow of the story seems fine to me. i only saw two instances of praise china/foreigners bad. i think it was two thugs harassing people. i think they were Americans. naturally since he is mc he became the strongest in the world. so his county of origin would get to run the place. nepotism.once he leaves earth china was never mentioned.the brick is ok. its will depend on people's taste.is it inefficient? yes.it's like a pommel. you have to end them rightly.its not the best story. its just a feel good stomp on everyone because im the OP MC story

bstasic:My take on Complete Martial Arts Attributes, Top 5 most irritating novels, author does not hesistate to make every interation between MC and other characters infuriting, starting from trying to be funny in a forceful way again and again, one or twice it will make me chuckle, but same cliche becomes unbearable, for example everytime MC does something amazing and characters are looking with amazement he thinks/says "I am not gay", and then usual routine of reacting to this for a few paragraphs. Using a brick as weapon is so out of place that everyone is weirded out and a few paragraphs on how "we should not offend him...", even weird enough to stop an all out war on the battlefield and for characters to make paragraphs of comments on this brick, probably only once it was trully funny in his academy after a fight when MC said "I give my every oponent two horns as a sign of respect" All males are simps when females give them that look they cower in fear... A lot of cringe all other the place The system itself is far from perfect, but if the author would focus only on fast progression most foreign readers will enjoy, but he also has to please his overlords with some racism and Praise the China... Hope someone will leave a few comments about how novel feels at 1000+ On the other hand, this novel gave me appreciation for other authors and how hard it is to make a readable novel. Thanks
bstasic
bstasicLv5

Fair enough, different opinions and taste does not mean someone is right or wrong, if MC was just using his cheat to be OP and domineering it would be a nice read to see new abilities and how he develops, like seeing the new pokemons. As the story is created by people there may be some sort of subconscious support of own nation, but in case of Chinese novels often it feels over-the-top where chinese people are righteous, saving the world and doing only what is right while foreigners are more often portrayed with villain qualities, the whole thing gives me the vibe of brainwashing, not just this novel, but in general there is a certain support for novels that praise the china, often badly written novels have good rating just because of this. After finding out about this while thing I become more sensitive and thoughtful whatever this is just some nationalism or something exagerated and closer to racism/xenophobic tendencies. Brick is fine, but after a few times it felt too forceful and another way to be funny or add to the wordcount, and it is certainly not strange enough to attract everyone's attention during a life and death battle. Probably the main problem is author trying to force things plus other problems breaks the flow while reading, so there is little enjoyment left. At the moment, I would recommend two great novels, Witch: Accumulate Experience Through The Knight Breathing Technique and Cultivation: Start From Simplifying Martial Arts Techniques. Both so good that I started reading mtl

KumoLoversClub:our brain waves might be different. the flow of the story seems fine to me. i only saw two instances of praise china/foreigners bad. i think it was two thugs harassing people. i think they were Americans. naturally since he is mc he became the strongest in the world. so his county of origin would get to run the place. nepotism.once he leaves earth china was never mentioned.the brick is ok. its will depend on people's taste.is it inefficient? yes.it's like a pommel. you have to end them rightly.its not the best story. its just a feel good stomp on everyone because im the OP MC story
KumoLoversClub
KumoLoversClubLv14

i read those. last i check there were few chapters

bstasic:Fair enough, different opinions and taste does not mean someone is right or wrong, if MC was just using his cheat to be OP and domineering it would be a nice read to see new abilities and how he develops, like seeing the new pokemons. As the story is created by people there may be some sort of subconscious support of own nation, but in case of Chinese novels often it feels over-the-top where chinese people are righteous, saving the world and doing only what is right while foreigners are more often portrayed with villain qualities, the whole thing gives me the vibe of brainwashing, not just this novel, but in general there is a certain support for novels that praise the china, often badly written novels have good rating just because of this. After finding out about this while thing I become more sensitive and thoughtful whatever this is just some nationalism or something exagerated and closer to racism/xenophobic tendencies. Brick is fine, but after a few times it felt too forceful and another way to be funny or add to the wordcount, and it is certainly not strange enough to attract everyone's attention during a life and death battle. Probably the main problem is author trying to force things plus other problems breaks the flow while reading, so there is little enjoyment left. At the moment, I would recommend two great novels, Witch: Accumulate Experience Through The Knight Breathing Technique and Cultivation: Start From Simplifying Martial Arts Techniques. Both so good that I started reading mtl
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