a refreshing story, fast development. it's too bad still have a classic lazy writer with MC don't have any family. Don't you writer have at least a mother ?
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LIKEYeah, but you have to factor in progression. Adding a mother, or father or any family member might not be in line with the progression pace he has in mind. He would have to factor them in too, and if it's not done well, they'll just end up being plain two dimensional characters. Filling space.