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2023-02-07 07:59

Nothing to complain about. Overall, the MC's progression, the antagonist, the deuteragonist, the background, and the setting are all really good. As well as the grammar and translation, they are beautiful and easy to read. Moreover, all characters are so natural, though I've never read any harem novels before, it comes out extraordinarily good. Therefore, I've opened my mind to read harem novels more often.

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