This is a story where the protagonist's mental monologue occupies more than 90% of the chapters. The interaction and conversation with other characters is minimal, being overshadowed by the unnecessary dumping of information or the protagonist's mental monologue. I thought the story would be about building a kingdom or country, unfortunate this is about the beautiful protagonist and how feminine her face is. Something absurd, which causes cringe or annoyance, is that since he was a baby the protagonist has his priority for 'his women' and what he will do to help them.
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Yes it's kind of building but you can't build kimdoms when you are eight
obviously. I suggest interacting with other characters and mind slaves are not characters, they are irrelevant fillers. Also, stop writing since MC will help 'his women', you were literally already forcing a romance when the lead was 1 day out of his mother's womb, which was cringe.
GodOfGreedAs:Yes it's kind of building but you can't build kimdoms when you are eight
You could just do a time skip till the MC is 16 or something
GodOfGreedAs:Yes it's kind of building but you can't build kimdoms when you are eight
So much Info dump ….Aww my head Hurts…sometimes
No to mention the first 20 chapters are plagiarized word for word from another ff on here called Baratheon the schemer. And after he got done plagerizing he did the same for almost every other chapter with wiki
