Excellent writing. The quality is far better than what I would expect of web novel. The characters seem pretty fleshed out. I just hope that the fully tragic arc of both the fl and ml won't drag on too long cause they're both sweethearts especially the fl. All in all, great writing. Its a story that I truly want to keep reading !

Well i can only say is this novel are amazing and this should be my first time reading a novel about villainess that in my liking need more chapter [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update]

wonderful story, no grammar mistakes(At least not evident or just small), i am very excited every day for new chapters, one of my favorites right now

Brilliant writing! Honestly it is becoming difficult in finding novels without harem-driven plot without any personality in characters or the world but this novel is a breath of fresh air. Also, the fl seems to be developing into a yandere UwU

The characters are well fleshed out and aren't flat. They have personalities and back stories that make them compelling and very interesting characters. The story in and of itself is very interesting and I honestly really like the plot, like at first the story seems generic but the author took the story in a different direction than other books that share the same genre and I honestly didn't expect it but I am definitely liking it. And this is something I really like and appreciate in this story ; Alice and Gabriel are honest and straightforward with each other, they trust each other and though there are misunderstandings if you could even call them that, they are resolved quickly and most of them only happen because Gabriel and Alice both don't have much prior experience when it comes to love and caring about others and being cared for.

This is the best novel I have found in WebNovel in a while. Plus, it's free.

a good read, never get bored while reading this, the author really good to write the character emotion

Writing Quality (4): Good not ground breaking. Story Development (3)/Character(3): Generic, nothing interesting, nothing new, just a refinement of the usual 'Raising the villainess.' And they do end up as do gooders(because of course they would—what? did you expect unique characters shaped by their environment? Hah.) Update Stab(5): Update stability does not mean volume of updates guys. World Background (2): You have read one villainess novel? Good then you know how this world works. Overall: Bland and nothing interesting.

Liked this novel quite a bit, the background felt relatively generic for a villainess fantasy style novel, however certain aspects of the story gave it a unique tinge from other relatively mediocre iterations of this genre. The story writing was also relatively good, although not anything extremely remarkable, it was quite good. I did find a few odd plot holes here and there, but since they're not extremely noticeable/intrusive I don't think they affected my reading experience much. Overall quite a good series which deserves more attention than it has right now.