Review Detail of Johnna_oo7 in The Alpha: Claiming His Enemy's Daughter

I have never been captivated by a story like this one!!! It is so good and the author is brilliant!! I must warn you potential readers that there are many dark and twisted scenes, however seeing the resiliency of the characters his what really makes it captivating. I love the constant suspense of the story and the development of the characters. It pains me to give this story less than a 5 star review, since it has me so hooked, but here are the two reasons why it gets a 4.6 star review instead of a full 5 stars: 1. There are many grammatical errors and past pretenses that need to be corrected. Sometimes I’d go as far to say there’s broken English. I would love nothing more than to be able to edit this story free of charge to make it a better reading experience for all. 2. It is a super slow burn romance story. I don’t normally like slow burns, and the slow pace is definitely agitating; however the story is so intriguing, I can look past that an appreciate the effort the author has put in to world building and character development. It’s a very intricate story with so many schemes, I have to believe the author is an absolute genius to be able to plot all this out! The author religiously drops 2 chapters each day, which is amazing. However once you get sucked in and all caught up it will be irritating, as they are typically short to keep reader costs down and often leave you on a cliffhanger. I’m always dying for more and very impatient for more, even though the author is so consistent. I think once a month or every six weeks or so, the author does a bonus drop of 6-10 chapters and I swear it’s like Christmas. If you can handle the dark themes and slow burn, I HIGHLY recommend this story.