The story is good. Nothing new to the genre but well executed. The trad is uneven, In fact it's MTL and that work 95% Of the time and it's pleasing to read. The only problem is with "gun" translate by "wooden something". A bit disappointing because it's almost the only problem. Keep in mind that it's free. Thanks for the trad I passed a good time.
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