Review Detail of Gunts92 in Marvel's Hogwarts Wizard
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The pronouns keep changing, the magic used in the Harry Potter world is inconsistent and incorrect, the MC is very dumb most times, the diolog is very bad, and the plot is meh. I would definitely recommend skipping this one.
Marvel's Hogwarts Wizard
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there is a limit it should make sense like you can't change the name of spells and what not that wouldn't be hp magic you could just call it magic system or something if you just want to make shit up duh like a magic system that transports you into a subspace to teach you magic not a Hogwarts school that's the whole point of using a specific system of magic your using a already specific rule set not just whatever author wants it should be believable that it came from said magic system
Moho_Amine:bruv this is a fanfic which means the author get make it works however he wants thats how fanfics work it doesnt have to be copy past of the harry potter siries honesly
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