Evaluation: Great Potential. WQ: MTL translation, if and only if copyright'er is & was able to proof read and edit most grammatical errors the this would be a fabulous fanfic of OP-verse. Tons of gramm errors that greatly affect MC & story progression. 2/5 SD: With an average to fast pace development without affecting the story & MC progression. If you could only fix the gramm errors this would be a great fanfic. 3/5 CD: MC is a chaotic-neutral type of guy which Is apt to the OP-verse. Yes there is a system but it is not that influential to the story progression as MC itself utilize his foreknowledge but not to the extent that will greatly affect the cannon plot which in turn lessen plot holes & avoid OP-verse schemes. 5/5 US: Author-san is up to date when it comes to the availability of the updates, downside is that it all boils down if you can stand up to MTL translation. 3/5 WB: OP-verse is being utilize as well as the unexplored area so as the adventure is spontaneous which is a plus. 4/5 Don't be discouraged by the reviews but take it as a challenge to do better. Kudos to author-san and well wishes! xD
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