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Javier_Graneros
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2024-12-03 01:21

Los poderes que recibieron buenos, no hay problemas con la personalidad del protagonista, algunos desarrollos en la historia me parecieron algo genéricos, quiero decir que son casi iguales a los que leí en otras historias con núcleos de mazmorras o Laberintos, la mayoría de los personajes secundarios con los que de encuentra el protagonista son los que esperarías de algo ambientado en un mundo de espada y magia, nobles arrogantes, bandidos, heroínas rescatadas, monstruos, así que no hay muchas posibilidades de interacciones con el protagonista, lo que sucede en los primeros capítulos no es algo que esperaba en historias este tipo, pues el protagonista actúa más como una forma de vida parasitaria, al menos espero que no termine convirtiéndose en mascota de alguna niña. (Algo muy común con protagonista no humanos)

Becoming a Dungeon Core

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Olmo_molina
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Not a Dungeon core novel, It IS a scam for the title, the prota IS a moster core, not DUNGEON

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LorDudu
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A good story, not perfect. but worth it. my review is about the twenty first chapter.

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Alcides_Martinez
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It's a great story I can't wait to see what you do with it in the future and make sure each level is huge and never be seen before in that world.

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