Review Detail of Danatos_2000 in A Warlock's Ascent

The MC is nice and observant but the plot feels a bit forced. Sometimes the MC acts mature but at other times he acts as a fool. Overall it is a nice novel for timepass reading. Author-kun I request you to stop making action scenes like that of a bollywood movie. In most fight scenes the MC first gets beaten and then suddenly he gets a "Crazy idea" and manages to defeat the monster. Please try to fix that. Try to make it look a bit natural. Also do you have a discord server? If so please post the link. You can also ask for readers view there to improve your writing.