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Unchosen
UnchosenLv131yr
2023-03-10 05:27

With nice pacing, solid world building and good character development, the author has shown us he can craft a world that will grip our attention while keeping us always anticipating. For debut novel this is just brilliant. I hope the author continues to wow us.

A Warlock's Ascent

Indian_Sage1
4.9
78 Chs

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Indian_Sage1
Indian_Sage1Author

Customary shameless review by author-san. On a serious note, if anyone wants to know anything about the book, before trying it yourself then feel free to leave a chapter comment with your query.

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Jinfiction
JinfictionLv1

What a great first venture! I am blown away by the writer's skills as he unravels a new world before his readers. The clarity and vocabulary used are both satisfactory! Detailed and descriptive writings >>>>>

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DaoistkMCpSR
DaoistkMCpSRLv1

Reveal spoiler

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Danatos_2000
Danatos_2000Lv10

The MC is nice and observant but the plot feels a bit forced. Sometimes the MC acts mature but at other times he acts as a fool. Overall it is a nice novel for timepass reading. Author-kun I request you to stop making action scenes like that of a bollywood movie. In most fight scenes the MC first gets beaten and then suddenly he gets a "Crazy idea" and manages to defeat the monster. Please try to fix that. Try to make it look a bit natural. Also do you have a discord server? If so please post the link. You can also ask for readers view there to improve your writing.

1yr
pilot_armour
pilot_armourLv4

noice novel...............................

1yr
flyny_887
flyny_887Lv1

It's a very interesting tale much worth the time. I ended up reading quite a few chapters and forgot to review. I'll be continuing it right after. Still in its beginning stages with just 25, this is the perfect book to binge and follow. The writing quality is much higher than a lot of stuff and the fantasy elements are sprinkled masterfully so as to not be alienating to the reader while giving a sense of continued awe. I love Dave's rational yet humane character and am looking forward to seeing how he develops down the line. Kudos to the author, really looking forward to more!

1yr
Jenival_Enyia
Jenival_EnyiaLv12

The story will require you to follow the details the author is trying to lay down. There is suspense and there is emotion. You will enjoy it. Especially if it's your genre.

1yr
NanotechPikachu
NanotechPikachuLv3

Ohohoh! The novel is fabulously written. I normally don't like long chaps having novels but, this is an exception. The author has written chaps well. Incredible work man. I hope you continue your hardwork and make this story a complete success !!!

1yr
MadScythe
MadScytheLv13

There's no problem with the grammar. And the Author's way of telling the story made me easily understand the course of events. As for the update stability, I can't say much since the book had just started. The sypnosis was the thing that really hooked me and the so-called God Hater. I wonder if the MC would become like Kratos of God of War, A god slayer. My expectation was through the roof because this interesting premise. The World Background was structured and well-thought out. I can't also say much about this aspect since he was still in the first world. For the MC, as long as he wasn't extremely stupid I'm fine with it.

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