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Ah_ren
Ah_renAuthor2yr
2023-01-15 01:24

Thanks for reading my first fanfiction story. Please do not forget to write comments and express your thoughts. Although I don't quite know why there are almost no berserk fanfictions. I decided to write at least a short story. If it's bad, tell me which part is bad. Let me fix that part too.

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manny0101
manny0101Lv5

Reason for so few berserk fanfics... Super tragic story with the demons being super op as compared to Guts... The things Guts went through... oh man... and poor Caska... *shudders*... You know the worst thing about it? Things like that have happened in real life... Instead of demons, it was humans.

Ah_ren
Ah_renAuthor

I have read and enjoyed two of the books you have written. It really made me proud that an author like you actually read and commented on my book.

manny0101:Reason for so few berserk fanfics... Super tragic story with the demons being super op as compared to Guts... The things Guts went through... oh man... and poor Caska... *shudders*... You know the worst thing about it? Things like that have happened in real life... Instead of demons, it was humans.
manny0101
manny0101Lv5

Thanks for reading my stories. I appreciate it. You need an editor, though. Many grammer mistakes... 😬

Ah_ren:I have read and enjoyed two of the books you have written. It really made me proud that an author like you actually read and commented on my book.
manny0101
manny0101Lv5

try using grammarly app. It's helpful.

Ah_ren:I have read and enjoyed two of the books you have written. It really made me proud that an author like you actually read and commented on my book.
Ah_ren
Ah_renAuthor

Instead of writing by myself, I write flowing sentences with the help of translation. Sometimes very complicated things turn out. I think what makes it mix is the way I form the sentences. English Turkish and English have two very different structures from each other. I think this is spoiling it.

manny0101:try using grammarly app. It's helpful.
manny0101
manny0101Lv5

Ah. Yes, translation doesn't always work perfectly.

Ah_ren:Instead of writing by myself, I write flowing sentences with the help of translation. Sometimes very complicated things turn out. I think what makes it mix is the way I form the sentences. English Turkish and English have two very different structures from each other. I think this is spoiling it.
ShiroNirvana
ShiroNirvanaLv1

author, I would like to know if the fanfic will have a lot of tragedy for the mc, and betrayal of allies and others?, I didn't really like these tags

Ah_ren
Ah_renAuthor

Any suggestions for tags? I just chose randomly. If you have any suggestions, I can adjust accordingly.

ShiroNirvana:author, I would like to know if the fanfic will have a lot of tragedy for the mc, and betrayal of allies and others?, I didn't really like these tags
ShiroNirvana
ShiroNirvanaLv1

I was just in doubt because the tragedy and betrayal tag suggests that the mc will have a life full of tragedies and maybe betrayal, if that doesn't happen I suggest you remove it. just my opinion

Ah_ren:Any suggestions for tags? I just chose randomly. If you have any suggestions, I can adjust accordingly.
Ah_ren
Ah_renAuthor

Thanks you

ShiroNirvana:I was just in doubt because the tragedy and betrayal tag suggests that the mc will have a life full of tragedies and maybe betrayal, if that doesn't happen I suggest you remove it. just my opinion
CliffkunLolRekt
CliffkunLolRektLv6

Im interested i got two questions one will the mc have a harem im looking for harem fics and two just makeing sure the wifus wont get raped by the enemy ever right Cus i hate ntr XD

Ah_ren:I have read and enjoyed two of the books you have written. It really made me proud that an author like you actually read and commented on my book.
MoonTree
MoonTreeLv10

Author friend, I have a few questions. What part of the canon is this "Guts" from? before "Griffith" chooses to become a demon or after "Guts" has already lost his hand? What will Guts's power level be like, because the Chakra is such a big trap that it's not even funny and Guts can be stupidly strong, maybe even inhumanly strong but the chakra just breaks the ashjdg of how overpowered he is. Could it be that now the chakra improves it passively? obviously it will have an affinity towards the yang attribute so it will most likely heal very very quickly from any damage.

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