Review Detail of MarcusDeGabriel in BNHA: nanomachines
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I like the idea and how it’s written, unfortunately I just don’t really care for a “tragic” backstory. It just feels so unnecessary, so I’m done here, but keep up with the story because I’m sure others will find it entertaining.
BNHA: nanomachines
GreatbookOFDAO
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Out of sheer ambition, I want the character to become something, so that you can understand his motives and reasons, as well as the way he sees the world.
Young_fruit_Smiley:why the tragic back story tho .. ?!
GreatbookOFDAO:thank you very much for the constructive criticism.
can you answer a yes or no is he gonna unite the world by eliminating corruption then become the unstoppable baddy that both heroes and villains would have to throw away their hate against each other to create a society where only the super powered individual's work together to protect world when that's done mc let's them defeat him and goes into the shadows to prepare for the next time humans start to fight each other again.
GreatbookOFDAO:Out of sheer ambition, I want the character to become something, so that you can understand his motives and reasons, as well as the way he sees the world.
Abayomi_Atoyegbe:can you answer a yes or no is he gonna unite the world by eliminating corruption then become the unstoppable baddy that both heroes and villains would have to throw away their hate against each other to create a society where only the super powered individual's work together to protect world when that's done mc let's them defeat him and goes into the shadows to prepare for the next time humans start to fight each other again.