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2023-01-23 22:49

This is a good book descriptive, certain words it needs proof reading and editing, however this is a talented author and I would recommend this book to someone looking to read a romance novel

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Thank you so much for the review. I will work hard on editing and proof reading.

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Im here to assist if you need help, with proof reading il add it and lookut for daily updates, best way to get views is for reviews 😊try commenting on others post in exchange for review they should review your book your a brilliant writer

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