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Primordial_VoidFox
Primordial_VoidFoxLv132yr
2023-05-17 07:43

1• Characters name keeps changing. 2• I won’t lie, this translation of the book has me cracking up witu laughter so much and I’m at work, and I barley am on chapter 5. I’ve skimmed the other chapters and it’s the same. 3• Feels a LOT like a Chinese novel, but that’s just me. (Only needs a jade beauty to get there and some “young masters” Pft) 4• Not a bad story idea in all honesty, could be a little more fleshed out and expanded upon. Feels like it’s a little lacking in character development.

Konoha: Gojo Satoru Template, Taking Over The Seventh Class

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CouchPotatoDandy
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Okay, so I only read a few chapters Naruto will never start yelling about killing people, maybe beating them but not killing. This out of character of the various characters in this fanfic makes it hard to read. Also the translation leaves much to be desired 🤷

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Sakkaku_no_mori
Sakkaku_no_moriLv14

MC's name keeps changing.... [img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

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Duke_of_Insanity
Duke_of_InsanityLv14

mc's name keeps changing , the translation is distracting

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Honoured_Writer
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Overall really good story just the translation. It’s really funny at times as well and needs to be updated more so in conclusion a chill story which is a fun time waster

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Carlos_Eduardo_5785
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The guy just copies and pastes the story, he doesn't review or correct it. Honestly, it could even be a good story, but the copy and paste gives me a headache.

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