Review Detail of GodJinh in Life as an Extra

Just finished reading all the 9 available chapters and it actually looks promising. Though its a little bit confusing to follow who is speaking due to the format on how the author writes and a bit too fast for my liking, these are just my preferences. The novel is also still in it’s early stages so I cant really fault it for these. If the author can dive into world lore and give characters personalities, I am sure this novel can go big. Suggestions(just my own preferences) Slow down on the pace Give characters personalities by giving more details on how, what, and why they think in certain ways Make it so it’s clear who is speaking Enrich the world lore NO NTR AND HAREM OMFG IM SICK OF THIS I DONT CARE IF THE LOVE INTEREST IS A GIRL OR BOY JUST PLS NOT NTR AND HAREM (The only acceptable harem is if it only contains 2-3 love interests) Vague and ambiguous Bromance and YURI😏 Pls dont make the mcs be so op right off the bat Healthy and friendly between the 4 mcs (W/ BOUNDARIES!!) That’s all! I wish the author the best of luck!