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2023-01-27 20:43

The book is intriguing and made me want to scroll another chapter.  As everyone is not perfect, the book has some flaws.  Background building: The author needs to give a more vague image of the futuristic world so as a reader I can enjoy it more.  Character:  Nethan  is one of its kind and knows his strength and limit. Love  to see him in a life threatening situation. Grammar : Author really needs to work on the grammar especially in the show  not tell part. There are some minor mistakes in the chapter too. Update : He is frequently updating everyday.  Plus the author has a good sense of humour. wish u best for the new book.

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