the is stupid and naive does he think he will have a peaceful life in a fantasy world where god demons angels and others mythicals creatures roam free just how stupid can he be

Interesting so far you have the usual misunderstanding about the mc where is super secret expert or reincarnation of someone, its not much of fanfic its more like a story where some stuff is got from various story and so far a single pokemon is the only thing that can be found to call this story a fanfic. its currently in the world building page so not much plot/agenda & etc.

There is not much to say, I love this novel despite the few chapters; If you are looking for a quiet novel then this is your cup of tea. moremoremoermroemroemreomroermeomreomroemromeorme

Good stuff, I can see that you are partly inspired from crossedge fanfics and the max level farmer anime, and so far the the book is rightly paced and the development seemed gradual. The only glaring issue to me was MC didn’t seem to have much of a character he seems more like an casual NPC to me, it is my opinion and it may be subjective. I also hope to see him saving strays (kuroka, individg, valerie, tosca (the church who is kiba’s batch mate) and many more.

My only real complaint about this is the lack of updates the MC is a bit cliche but overall it does not ruin the story and adds a bit of humor

Fun story so far, pretty readable and focused so far.

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So far so good. Keep it up, loving the👌story.👌

grammar is good, the plot is good, character development is... how do i say it... it's okay i guess... world background is still unknown (the confirmed one is dxd but i feel there's still some franchise and the world is a cross-fiction)