Quite an interesting story. Has a lot of plotholes but still entertaining so I just kinda ignore them but would've preferred if you put more effort to straighten some facts or timeline in this story. The low star rating almost makes me skip this, but I got intrigued, well good to say I'm not disappointed. Would still follow this story until it finishes. The low raters (?) are just plain mean. I wish you luck finishing this story. Thanks for sharing.
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