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John_Kula
John_KulaLv41yr
2023-06-29 03:06

I really enjoy this novel! The Snu-Snu is great. The system, while simplified to only have HP and MP as stats instead of including things like Strength, Magic, Agility, or Defense, work well within that framework. The system is actually interesting and provides a lot of depth for combat and not just sexual stuff. My only complaint with the system is that it doesn't go far enough. Anon has the ability to steal skills with his Memory Eater ability, which makes sense. He also has the ability to merge skills into stronger ones. What baffles me is that he hardly uses these abilities at all! There are many instances where he has an opportunity to absorb someone's memories and get new skills to grow stronger, and he just doesn't. As of chapter 156, he got a blessing that lets him learn skills of any class, so I hope he uses this ability more often. Maybe that was a way to explain why he didn't absorb their memories. Maybe he wouldn't have gotten any skills out of it perhaps? IDK. But please lean into the skill stealing aspect of the story more. The grammer does have some problems, but English is not the author's first language, so I'm willing to be lenient. Plus, he said that he got an editor that would correct the mistakes, so that's even better. And the grammar isn't even that bad to begin with. Overall, I'm excited to see more!

Reincarnated with the Mind Control Powers in Another World.

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JoshNeedsAComfort
JoshNeedsAComfortLv4

HAHA another psychopath mc I recommend it 100% (GOOD JOB AUTHOR )

1yr

A9B
A9BLv4

Fun read. have its flaw but its ok so far. I hope its get better.

1yr
DaoistsVYVaM
DaoistsVYVaMLv15

what is the free use tag supposed to mean I hope it's not like anyone can use the girls as they please

1yr
DRAVEN_
DRAVEN_Lv13

there won't be NTR right? [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Badger
BadgerLv12

The writing and story are great. I really enjoy the mc and his developments. I think this novel needs more love and the author needs more appreciation. The first couple chapter have some grammar errors by the author hired a editor to smooth it out and is also taking English classes. I appreciate the author trying his best to improve the quality of his writing. Most authors never take advice or try to improve they’re novels and just delete comments about it. So Mr. Author of ya read this just know that you’re doing a great job and I hope to see more of your great work. 👍👍👍

1yr
Night_phantom
Night_phantomAuthor

HI SHAMELESS AUTHOR HERE RATING HIS OWN NOVEL. THIS NOVEL IS FOR PERVERTS ONLY AND FOR THOSE WHO WANT TO SEE SOME REAL ACTION.

1yr
Mrhekko
MrhekkoLv3

It starts out a bit rough but it gets better later on. You will miss out if you don't read until at least page 20. The only things I wish for are better grammar and more chapters. And author I know you are thinking of adding NTR, but please, please don't. I and probably many others will drop this then. Thank you author for making this masterpiece. SPOILER AHEAD Author, please make the MC create a tentacle monster he can control, hehe, and maybe some kinky scenes. Hehe

1yr
MDN_
MDN_Lv14

This is amazing, man. I can feel that we might be related somehow author. The only issues that I have are that there are not enough chapters, and the 🍋 needs more details if possible. keep up the effort author big ups from me.

1yr
MonsieurFacts
MonsieurFactsLv14

Reveal spoiler

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Kaseyj1999
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