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BrotherLoneWolf
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2023-08-28 05:53

Better title would have been "The cute saint among humans".. he is literally so childishly kind and has saint like compassion, makes you wonder how he survived without parents and working part-time with a traumatized sister who was hurt by this ugly world.. which atleast I don't believe are possible for any human, so I can only guess he was a reincarnated saint god or something which doesn't sit that well with me in the character build up... I still feel many other characters are pretty childish as well

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There’s a saying I like that goes ‘no one will ever understand how much violence it took for me to become this gentle.’ I feel like that perfectly encapsulates Malachi and who I wanted him to be, because even though he’s suffered so much in different areas he’s somehow oblivious to the pain that would have hardened most people, and he continues trying to show love and compassion to those close to him irregardless of past experiences. Even when his personality changes, it isn’t born because of a slight he suffers, but instead a need to protect and avenge everything he holds dear. He’s no less of a regular human than you or I, he just responded to adversity in a different way.

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instead of oblivious, i prefer to call him "naive" as well as "comfort zone introvert"

AnathaShesha:There’s a saying I like that goes ‘no one will ever understand how much violence it took for me to become this gentle.’ I feel like that perfectly encapsulates Malachi and who I wanted him to be, because even though he’s suffered so much in different areas he’s somehow oblivious to the pain that would have hardened most people, and he continues trying to show love and compassion to those close to him irregardless of past experiences. Even when his personality changes, it isn’t born because of a slight he suffers, but instead a need to protect and avenge everything he holds dear. He’s no less of a regular human than you or I, he just responded to adversity in a different way.
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