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Erudite_JellyBean
Erudite_JellyBeanLv42yr
2023-02-25 20:33

I read up to the latest chapter (chapter 42). And from what I understood this is going on a unique si-fi trope. Love the idea about metal trees and monolith👌👌. There are multiple pov's though. So if you are looking for a single main lead novel then this might not be your cup of tea. If you are a si-fi geek like me😅 then you would love this. There are some great fictional ideas in this novel. And the character interactions and the current world building are great. The current state of humans are also intersting. So far no 2 dimensional characters😂😂. The only thing I can't understand is the path of this novel. The novel has the evolution tag. So I am a bit confused😅. In the future whether the novel describes the future human evolution or development of humanity through technology, I don't know🤷. Maby both😅😅✌️✌️. All in all good work author and I hope you continue this amazing work.

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HalfPint
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HalfPint
HalfPintAuthor

Thank you for your honest Review. I can't express enough how big it means to me. This review has given me the motivation needed to continue the story. I appreciate it very much. <3 . I've got some big plans for this story. And now will work towards one that can be worthy of yours and other's attention and time. Thanks :D

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PrimordialDesolate
PrimordialDesolateLv4

Huh... I'm not sure when the author will come back from hiatus but we are waiting for the story to continue..

1yr

TheHighElite
TheHighEliteLv4

good read currently read up to 135 I gotta add more characters to post this but I definitely recommend reading this

1yr
MansonFD7
MansonFD7Lv3

It does interested me in the first 2 chapter. But the info dumps sometimes breaking my immersion of the reading, as if I'm reading a college/school thesis instead of reading an imaginative book.So My only suggestion is:1. Get to the point and show us what the character doing/feel/experiencing2. Try to make the sentences felt hyperbolic/dramatic3. Prioritize show don't tell (Because I see you're using tell over show like I've mentioned previously)4. Separate the dialogue from the sentences.Example:He/she doing/feel/experiencing something, and then he said/asked/explained."Bla bla bla."You got what I meant? This will make it easier to read.5. Rephrase the complicated sentences. (Maybe using Quillbot will make it easier. Considering it was 9/10$ per month).I do have faith that this book will be good, as long as you had to fix it and try to re-read the sentences you deemed to be difficult to read.I hope this'll help.

1yr
TheHighElite
TheHighEliteLv4

a shame this was dropped by the author I think

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