I read through chapter 19, and I plan on continuing. I highly enjoy this story. You don't see many MHA fanfics that start way before UA high. But I think this type of story is considered niche due to the pacing and nonviolence involved in the beginning chapters. I like the idea of an archangel/seraphim quirk. It's unique and different. The author does a fantastic job of creating an image of the setting. The overall story is generally wholesome. A major issue I saw, and continue to see in many novels, are expressions and body movement. "Rolling my eyes, nodding in agreement, chuckling," etc. This novel, in particular, uses these about 5-8 times per chapter. It's too repetitive, and it's considered a bad writing habit. There are so many other ways to convey the feelings of your characters. I also don't particularly like any of the characters. I didn't see much individuality, but more like copy-and-paste personalities. Their uniqueness comes from their quirks, and that's it. Maybe it's better later on, and I will find out. Overall, I'd give this a 3.8/5.
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I was wondering why I stop a quarter of the way through and drop it.
