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Venkadesh_S_7600
Venkadesh_S_7600Lv11yr
2023-08-01 16:37

I am in love with this book! The plot gets deeper and deeper every chapter and some lore is obviously present, which makes me want to keep reading. The author is leisurely uploading all chapters, but quality takes time. The story is original and I love it very much! I'm sticking with the story for a while now :)

Moondust: the moment of tangency

daylightmoon123445
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6 Chs

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daylightmoon123445
daylightmoon123445Lv1

Hey, shameless author review here! But you know what they say, you are your first biggest fan :) So, I'll be honest here, I don't know how this story will turn out. This was a thriller, but the thriller didn't speak to me, so I just changed it to something overnight(because I can, lol). Regarding the writing quality and story development, as far as I can say, it's nice and it's readable so it's of good quality. My favorite part of the story is the characters, especially the side ones. I enjoy writing them so much and I hope you like them as well!! I've never been good in the stability of updates, but let me try and stay consistent this time(I've been stockpiling the chapters like huntsmen do for winter). The world background is well...it's not pretty wide since it's just a small town, but hey, you never know(hint, hint). Thanks for reading my story, let me know some tips and tops, and please don't leave anything mean, I would gladly learn from my mistakes but not at the cost of my feelings.

1yr

DARK_DEKU
DARK_DEKULv4

The book is so good only read a few chapters and I am already hooked update more chapters please

1yr
JayZee_007
JayZee_007Lv2

I was hooked by this book from the first chapter, as it introduced me to the fascinating and complex character of Alexia, a 16-year-old girl who suffers from insomnia and social anxiety. The author did a great job of portraying her struggles and emotions, making me empathize with her and root for her. The story was fast-paced and full of surprises, as Alexia encountered a mysterious girl who changed her life forever. The plot was well-written and original, with a lot of twists and turns that kept me guessing until the end. The book also explored themes such as identity, destiny, friendship, and courage, in a realistic and relatable way. The writing style was smooth and captivating, with vivid descriptions and engaging dialogue. The book had a cliffhanger ending that left me wanting more, and I can’t wait to read the next installment. I would recommend this book to anyone who loves sci-fi, mystery, and drama, with a touch of romance. This book was a gem that deserves more recognition.

1yr
GEEGEE
GEEGEELv13

In love with those made up words. makes our MC very unique. Very curious about a lot of things and hoping to get some answers as chapters come in the future. Keep up d good work🥰🥰🥰🥰

1yr
alu_sachi
alu_sachiLv12

This is such a good work. Thought it is only a few chapters, behind these few chapters I have seen a level of greatness that I have never seen. The author is too creative and talented in that anyone can easily get drowned in this fantasy not knowing how they will get out.Truly a great work.

1yr
ATOMIC_MOON
ATOMIC_MOONLv3

Honestly, I am immersed in the story while reading the constant change of scenes the writing quality is excellent But the punctuation was a little off I am sure you will sort out that thing too

1yr
daylightmoon123445
daylightmoon123445Lv1

Please, the first 5 chapters are a bit too chaotic, but it gets better trust me. I've made mistakes, but I was very young when I wrote this, and I'm glad I got the opportunity and inspiration to continue it now :) I'm on hiatus till October 2023, but I've been stockpiling them for a long time now and hopefully they are appealing for readers :)

1yr
Anam_zulfiqar
Anam_zulfiqarLv2

The MC is so unique oml. and you display her uniqueness in such a good manner where it gets interesting the more I read it! will definitely recommend this to others on here! ^^

1yr
Gabrielle_Johnson_6482
Gabrielle_Johnson_6482Lv14

This book is heading in a really interesting direction- much different from what I originally thought. Am very interested to find out more about the cause of Lexis nightmares. Somethings not right with her life.

1yr
jaymanifesto
jaymanifestoLv3

This book is somewhat relatable in terms of character design. Upon reading the synopsis, I can’t help but picture a shy, self-conscious girl who has a lot of issues to confront within herself. Overall, the writing style is good. I don’t have much to say about how this story will play out since it’s full of mysteries as a story, and we have yet to learn more about Alexia. However, if I were to be honest I find the trope of the MC a bit….overrated. I’ve seen many of the “socially anxious female MC” in certain medias and my advice is to add a bit of elements that could make your story stand out more. Try mentioning a short backstory of how she turned out to be friendless and introverted in the synopsis, since your synopsis will basically be the “first impression” people will notice about your story. Overall, that is my only complaint. I love the Edgar Allan Poe passage in the beginning, it gives me a vibe of a mysterious, angsty indie RPG game where MC has a lot of secrets to uncover. Keep pushing, author!

1yr
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