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WISEDRAGON
WISEDRAGONLv61yr
2023-10-08 03:09

The grammar is simply too bad !!! And some of the readers even pointed out some mistakes too but the author just ignored them after leaving a like ! tf ?

The Unlimited Money System

Me_DaVillain
4.2
153 Chs

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Barfk
BarfkLv4

Thanks, man pagpatuloy moyan ah, pag hindi sapakin kita hayp ka haha!...

2yr

One_Singularity
One_SingularityLv14

Top Quality work , I like how the author lets the Mc do what he wants and letting him go of his regrets by giving him the power to change it by himself .

2yr
Love_C_raft
Love_C_raftLv14

The word Cliché is an understatement for this fast as* plot, come on, put some depth into your novel, the only thing that's keeping your novel from being the same as MTL is the decent English, you could have put some time to add depth into your novel, your novels feels like a copy and paste of typical URBAN Chinese novel with the author having patience of a 5 year old, and imagination of a person under a rock, just by having 1 love interest you separate from the other urban novels, by having patience and making it so that he spends his money in a smart way would make your better than others, and by making his system point is converted by spending money with a ratio of 1:10000 and by having plans & goals you will have something to look forward to.

2yr
Alusec_BR1
Alusec_BR1Lv10

don't drop, this story is very good. :D xD :D xD :D xD :D xD :D xD :D xD :D xD :D xD :D xD :D xD :D xD :D xD :D xD :D xD :D xD :D xD :D xD :D xD :D xD :D xD :D xD :D xD :D xD

2yr
oxygen5011
oxygen5011Lv2

Cliché story with cliché characters, nothing more nothing less. Girls and women alike falling in love with the mc easily thanks to his system. Every girl is a 'jade' beauty be it mature or young. The visual sense of their looks doesn't bring any realistic sense to readers because every one of them is a 'jade' beauty. Story development isn't exciting for any reason, just some girls got hooked up by mc due to poor circumstances, bad husbands, need of money etc.

2yr
Genesis1o1
Genesis1o1Lv2

This is so disgustingly trash full of drama reverse ra- pe and ra pe victim being lover you know where this is going the drama part the mc keeps on leaving women he slept with in dangerous situation mostly the married women and their daughter with trash or abusive husband (mom-daughter) they are so dumb more like retard just like the author. The authors keeps doing trash sh !Ts just for disgusting drama when mc can just end it with him bringing them to his home to those with whom he has slept with but nah he leaves the lanlord with the husband who will sell his own wife just for some penny (Mc knows her husband sold her to someone when he lost a beta to someone ) yet knowing that insteat of taking her with him he just gives her his number and leaves bro says he hates cliches yet is the one who is doing that just to create drama

1yr
ProfessorofCulture
ProfessorofCultureLv14

it's the same old cliche faceslapping with worse grammar well I will delete this review if I find it better as I read on

2yr
Melshan
MelshanLv7

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2yr
One_Singularity
One_SingularityLv14

An Amazing novel, returning back in time has always been one of my favourite tags and this novel perfectly shows that, I just hope that the author could write more words in his chapters. Overall I think the book has a lot of potential and I hope the author continues with it.

2yr
LazyErosage
LazyErosageLv3

Again an amazing work, everything is great. Not so fast or nor so slow, it has pace of story. So don't destroy it, and keep going the way that you feel is alright... Keep up the Great work....

2yr
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