Review Detail of DemonSosa in DBZ: Akatsuki

I think you shouldn't focus on making the mc op to fast and focus on other aspects of the story like charterzation world building ect, in most fics the author focuses on making the mc op and then their not left for the mc do and the author does not know what to write after that .not to say that they are not op mc with a good story a/n :anos from misfit of demon King academy. so if your going to make the mc op at least come up with a compelling story of course this just a suggestion and u can disregard everything I just said.