Review Detail of Sir_Guardian in I Am The Game's Villain

book jumps around too much, half of the time I felt like I'm reading filler content. the character's interactions are good but what made me drop it is why in the everliving Fook are you throwing in world building in the middle of an event with characters lives on the line! Focus on what tf is happening right now. Stop changing topics so dam much. and why is the main character lieing about literally everything! and why is he falling in love with a dead chick/familiar? he literally can't handle a lesser evil God, but when he is warned that, literally, all of the gods will smite him if he tries to give her a body. He doesn't even flinch over it while on the other hand. He says I won't live if they don't beat the big bad guy that's not even on the gods level. like dam either make him confident or don't stop making him seam fearless for one big thing then show him stressing out about little stuff.