The beginning of this novel was extremely strong. Part one just finished and last 20-30 chapters really dragged down the overall story quality for me. Felt rushed, plots holes and seems like characters completely swapped up who they were or died with little to no explanation or reasoning. Hope the next part does a better job with these things and doesn’t continue down this same path. Really feel part one could of been better, but honestly this novel is one of the better ones on this site still.
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