Story with a lot of potential. Good world building, but somehow it's very annoying to read, both the MC and writing style are the reason I think. You can clearly see the MC is intentionally made to be stupid and annoying for the sake of development but it's a pain to read. For writing quality: in some chapters it's just MC talking with "้his two companions" in circle no major progression at all it's a waste of time IMO, I will just skip this kind of chapters and there is quite a bit of them in this story. There is also a perspective swap which is not done in a good manner.
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