Review Detail of ProPug in Time For Vengeance

Hey! I just finished reading fourteen chapters, and I must say, the book is really good! Plot and character wise, easily 9/10, there were some minor things that were off about it but not worth pointing out, Other than that, great work! I only have two suggestions: 1) try getting some sort of cover, would make it more appealing for new readers 2) Sometimes, I think you can decrease the paragraph size, because it's a bit hard to read, other than that, there's nothing else I can say about this, keep up the good work!