Review Detail of javalka in Time For Vengeance

I think the writing improved as the chapters progressed, but I think the author could benefit from reading other books and becoming more familiar with the craft of writing. To really draw readers into the story, the author should focus on developing clear and detailed descriptions of characters, settings, and events. You have picked a strong storyline (murder & revenge) and if it's done well, it can be really interesting. I wish you the best of luck in polishing and shaping your story.