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Taste_The_Rainbow_8941
Taste_The_Rainbow_8941Lv31yr
2023-03-11 01:51

In my review I'd like to say that this was a good idea. However, said idea was executed poorly. The spelling is horrible, the Grammer is horrible, and the dialogue is horrible. As soon as the Mc reincarnates theirs a 15-year time skip to Canon. No development whatsoever. Out of five, I rate this a 1.5/5 The author seems to have limited knowledge of cursed energy as well. As someone who's writing a jujutsu kaisen fanfic, I should know.

Reincarnated As Sukuna In Black Clover

Quill_Monarch
4.1
24 Chs

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Quill_Monarch
Quill_MonarchAuthor

I am sorry if you didn't like the novel. I am a complete novice writer so I make some mistakes. I will try to improve the things you have mentioned and thanks for the honest review. I appreciate it.

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Nyxio
NyxioLv4

don't worry you will improve. No one should expect pro writing skills from a fellow fan, though it's always a plus xD

Quill_Monarch:I am sorry if you didn't like the novel. I am a complete novice writer so I make some mistakes. I will try to improve the things you have mentioned and thanks for the honest review. I appreciate it.
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1yr
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SleepySmile
SleepySmileLv14

u wrote 5 chap in 3 month ur argument won't work

1yr
Taste_The_Rainbow_8941
Taste_The_Rainbow_8941Lv3

mate, I had 2 months of exams because I'm in university, and I just recently finished and got back into writing. You'd know that if you actually went through my book and read the author notes instead of just clicking on my profile.

SleepySmile:u wrote 5 chap in 3 month ur argument won't work
1yr
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Quetzalcotal
QuetzalcotalLv4

I recommend you to write a rough draft of the story from beginning to end in notes or something. Then, according to that draft, expand the chapters. I made a mistake by starting fanfic's that should be 100's of chapters long leaving two of them. But after that I began to write a rough draft and completed a fanfic with it. Always remember to know the ending of a book before starting it.

Quill_Monarch:I am sorry if you didn't like the novel. I am a complete novice writer so I make some mistakes. I will try to improve the things you have mentioned and thanks for the honest review. I appreciate it.
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Quill_Monarch
Quill_MonarchAuthor

The Story is going to resume in mid March so please be patient. My final exams are starting on 20 Feb that is why. hope you guys understand.

1yr

Gideon_Samuelson_5974
Gideon_Samuelson_5974Lv4

good story although it reads like a punch to the gut

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Red_Roman
Red_RomanLv12

It's tough to read because of random capitalization, and other general grammar mistakes. If you don't mind that too much then this is probably an okay read🤷🏾‍♂️. But personally, I have zero trust in stories that don't take grammar seriously.

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Yash_Naraniya
Yash_NaraniyaLv1

The story is good, keep it up and keep on updating! Hope you can finish the story and don't drop it as other people do. keep it up Author and do your best

1yr
Balling
BallingLv4

Cool idea, but that’s it. Nothing else about this story is above average in any way. Also it goes through the story way too fast and the mc is too powerful making it so he faces no challenges and there are no stakes because he will always win so the fights so it just end up being boring.

1yr
MahoV
MahoVLv4

Not an amazing story but not terrible eitherHowever he doesn't use sukuna abilities at all like wtf!!!?Overall the story has potential and could be better but can still be read

1yr
Kairos0310
Kairos0310Lv13

I actually really like the fact that someone other than asta cannot use magic as the mc can beat him without breaking any logic. Also i do hope you do change some stuff from the cannon plot as it will be more interesting

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GalahadAlter
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I liked it .,.,.,.,.,.,.,,..,..,.,..,.,

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