First horrible grammar. updates at least once a day so that's good. not sure where this story is headed or whats going on some of the time but its a fanfic so its easy to understand some things but again the grammar makes it hard to understand whats going on sometimes. I'm confused by the main character sometimes. At one point he went to Johns apartment. Who's john? and he compared himself to the Greek omega symbol. omega symbol means ending in biblical sense and Yohan means god is gracious. they don't mean god. or whatever he was going for. but overall if you can handle the grammar then its an ok story. I recommend giving this story a try but if its not for you I would understand.

MC become peerage of sona, for more exp u can read in ch12/13 i already leave my reason there.

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its a great novel and would love to read more of it in the future. .............................................................................................

The stability of the output of chapters is good, but the impression spoils the quality of the letter. The plot leaves much to be desired. The personality of the characters has not been worked out, there is too sharp a change in character or nothing happens to the character with a strong depression from death, as if the main character did not even cover his own death.

keep up the good work im loving this story so far [img=update][img=recommend]

i don't understand why he must become devil. it cliche you know, many fanfic write like that too.