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This novel was pretty good at the start it showed its slowness at the start Wich is good don't want to waste people who like faster past time and although it was getting slitly stale the hype for the academy arc made one stay but as someone who read till chapter 303 I can swear my life that the I feel lied too . Because although there was some minor problems they were minor but when the academy arc started the MC became dumb it is like he is smart at school work but became stupid at everything else and devolped a love for hiding his strength for no reason absolutely none so when he fights its with a handicap but he's so mad at the fact he lost and he thinks it's because he is too weak. and I also dis like the fact that he will not set a boundary with his one dimensional yandere sister. I honestly feel like there are unnecessary parts that should have been cut while chapter should have been fused so the author would have the space to expand on the MC on his relationship and boundary between his sister so she won't seem like she was just put there for a fetish and no other reason it will also be good if the author expand on his lover I how he feels towards the heroins and his motivations and motives because he doesn't seem to hate most who harmed him at most he seems slightly bitter also return the MC's intelligence

Erotic RPG: I am in the Game world, But My Heroines are Villainesses

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