Review Detail of Sahin_Ahmed_5099 in Erotic RPG: I am in the Game world, But My Heroines are Villainesses

It is a nice novel to read.There are many good points you can find in other review's. I will like to point out some problems...I think the pace is the story is little slow.There is too much monologues of different characters.I understand that character development is important but rather than telling us about it through their monologue you can actually show us their progress by their action. I am giving this review after reading till 315,so you can rest assure I have given it ample time and the flaw I have pointed out is what I feel.