Nice book but you need to work on how you describe and illustrated the characters and surroundings properly and it needs a bit of editing...but apart from that, the author had good potential and I can't wait for more chapters to be released. The process of writing is to learn and correct mistakes so don't feel sad if you are corrected in anyway, koodos💯
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