Review Detail of Nxgen_Snail_Kota in Infinite Realities: Re

It's not bad. The grammar and writing style is digestible, which is saying something on this site, but it reads less like a novel and more like the MC is crafting his own autobiography. The whole, 'My name is' introduction breaks immersion in one of the worst ways possible and comes off kinda cringe. No normal person wakes up one day and decides to start monologing about their entire life story up to that point, they know who they are, and what they like and don't like so there's no reason for them to reiterate it to themselves, it makes the character feel less like a character and more like an outsider looking in, a really bad plot device to explain to the readers who the main character is. I would have rather we got to know who our main character was and their passions, opinions, and pastimes through their actions, either through a brief showing in the first chapter of the main character doing what they enjoy, (if they like reading, show them reading a book for an hour or two) or talking to someone else about their personal opinions on matters in a natural way, (Like talking to their friends about stocks or something over breakfast) anything other than that cringe shit. Still, I enjoy this author's other stuff and aside from my own personal gripes at the beginning, this story isn't bad.