IMPORTANT:CAN BE IMPROVED and I personally recommend reading this great fanfic All was fine until the last couple chapters. From around chapter 65 the MC, who was built as a hypercaustious and intelligent man, had had a serious downgrade to his intellect. He made a stupid decision even though he felt as though a job he recieved was a trap, stupidly accepted a total stranger’s request to go drinking in a bar that Tom presumably hadn’t gone to, and is openly showing his face and powers to the Bat family. The Bat family are 100% smart and capable enough to trace back his powers to his “vigilante” days and will eventually find traces of his dark dealings. While this review does show my dissatisfaction of the MC’s rapid and sudden drop in IQ and forced stupidty for the plot, maybe this was all carefully planned out from the author. I could understand the lack of power building in order to make the MC not monsterously OP, but the one important thing that the MC did have was his intellect. That is my only complaint. Other than that I personally love the story in general. 5 stars for the writing quality 4 stars for the update stability and world building 2 stars for the story design and character development (the reasons as stated above, but before it was at a 4) Keep up the great work author, and I seriously hope that you didn’t impair the MC’s IQ for the sake of the recent plot in chapters 70-72 [img=recommend]
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LIKEUpdate: Chapters 73-74 already make up for the IQ drop in the aforementioned review. Character Development is now at a solid 4/5
I doubt it, because regardless of what the author does, the thing with Deathstroke was forced, and unless he retcons it, it's not going to suddenly fix the MC's magical drop in intelligence (which until where I read was used simply to have Deathstroke "work for him"), especially considering the fact that if the author used a dumb plot once, it's highly likely he is going to do again. PS: I will probably still read, just not with the same lv of enthusiasm.
PrimordialOfDeath:Update: Chapters 73-74 already make up for the IQ drop in the aforementioned review. Character Development is now at a solid 4/5
