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KingConnerLv151yr
2023-02-20 10:28

The story has been interesting, looking forward to what's to come!πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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Another review! Thanks KingConnor. And thank you for the power stones too :) Your support motivates me to continue writing.

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Compulsory Author Review :/ Now that we’ve basically reached the end of Volume 1 Arc 2 (Chapter 23), I thought to write a review. Also use this comment section as Q&A if need be. The synopsis is pretty sh * t so I need to work on that. The story is one of character growth: MAIN CHARACTER: Here we have a fat, middle-aged dork who has to change his ways from becoming reclusive and not being anything to speak about, to becoming rich, charismatic, physically strong, and se * ually capable. It will take a while. From these first two arcs, I think I have presented how insufferably pathetic he can be, but also how much potential he has in the tank to become the 4 traits I mentioned earlier. His lowered moral inhibitions will also play a factor in propelling him (rather rapidly) to become an interesting individual and great MC. HAREM: My goal is to make the female characters as 3 dimensional as possible, while also making Samuel’s encounters and relationships with each as interesting as possible. I plan to cap the harem to about 8-12 women (including inc * stuous relationships). Flings and s * x friends may be considered once he is actually rich, but for now solid relationships is the way. Harem will be diverse and cater to many fetishes: M * LFs, V * rgins, Bullies, Twins, Bookworm and everyone’s mother lol. The whole lot. As highlighted in the synopsis, this story will also delve a lot into MC’s interactions with the world at large (AU Earth)… how he grows rich and the details of the process, as well as how he slowly becomes a β€˜Chad’. SYSTEM: The non-sentient system is a complex tool at Samuel’s behest, that constantly grows and is honestly one of the most attractive features of the story I’ve written in my opinion. I can’t think of what else to mention here. If you have any questions, leave a comment and I’ll answer promptly. P.S: Please give my story until chapter 15-20 before considering if it’s worthy to continue reading. I am confident your impressions of the story will change many times over these initial chapters anyway. Happy reading.

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