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Item: Upgrade System In The Undead Skeleton
Rating: 3.4

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this is my review based on the limited chapter I've read so far. the story is somewhat interesting and that's off 8 chaps,there are a few issues I face regarding this novel the dialogue is somewhat lacking interaction doesnt have the flow I envisioned tho maybe it's just with me secondly the characters, their designs can be easily forgotten but otherwise from that I know this novel will be great in the future

Upgrade System In The Undead Skeleton

DragonOfChocolate

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DaoistKQVXSLLv11DaoistKQVXSL

I know the novel is fresh but I couldn't resist the urge to write this review

1yr

DaoistKQVXSLLv11DaoistKQVXSL

I know the mc doesn't have much experience but growing up in a place like that must have thought him not to trust as much with him exposing that he has a skill it is not rlly to his advantage.

1yr

DragonOfChocolateAuthorDragonOfChocolate

Hello Fellow Daoist, Thanks for your suggestions. I will try to improve my writing, so you guys can enjoy my novel. :)

1yr

Boboiboy_JLv4Boboiboy_J

ooiii... continue it...

DragonOfChocolate:Hello Fellow Daoist, Thanks for your suggestions. I will try to improve my writing, so you guys can enjoy my novel. :)

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