this is my review based on the limited chapter I've read so far. the story is somewhat interesting and that's off 8 chaps,there are a few issues I face regarding this novel the dialogue is somewhat lacking interaction doesnt have the flow I envisioned tho maybe it's just with me secondly the characters, their designs can be easily forgotten but otherwise from that I know this novel will be great in the future
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LIKEDragonOfChocolate:Hello Fellow Daoist, Thanks for your suggestions. I will try to improve my writing, so you guys can enjoy my novel. :)