Item: Aberrant Adaline : Getting Mr Drew
Rating: 4.8
Author: LazyErosage

LazyErosageLv32yr

2023-03-13 14:27

From the synopsis, the novel seems to be a story of contrasts and sibling rivalry, as well as a tale of personal growth and redemption. The protagonist Adele's initial desire to be better than her sister and her subsequent struggle to come to terms with her feelings towards her sister's marriage to a ruthless CEO provides a potentially engaging and emotional plotline. As for words of advice for the author, I would suggest focusing on character development and exploring the dynamics of the twin sisters' relationship in-depth. The story's setting and the presence of a potentially complex antagonist also provide opportunities for exploring themes such as family, wealth, power, and identity. Additionally, paying attention to pacing, plot twists, and the narrative's emotional impact could also enhance the reader's experience. Overall, I encourage the author to trust their vision for the story and let the characters guide the plot towards an authentic and satisfying conclusion. ... Good Luck 👍

Aberrant Adaline : Getting Mr Drew

Sophia Yomere

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26 Chs

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Sophia_YomereLv4

Wow. Thank you so much for sharing your thought about this book. I haven't been paying attention to the things you pointed out because of my busy schedules and am also managing two more books, but I'll put your thoughts into use now. Don't mind me being shameless, but I'll love and appreciate it if you take a look at my other books; "Hello! Mr Mask" and "Trapped In Vampville" and share your thoughts on them too. Thank you once again ❤️❤️

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Blessing_OLv14

The story got me hooked and itching for more. I love Adeline's persona though she can't talk, she speaks louder than anyone else and that is what I like about her the most🤩🤩. I am glad that Drew was able to see the beauty in her silence. 🥰

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BookreadsLv1

A nice and well written book with a fresh plot. I highly recommend this book to any reader. It's worth reading. Kudos to the author, keep up with the good work.

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